Think you got it all sussed out?
Maybe yes - maybe no(t). I just developed a business card for a new product and I was pretty pleased with the result - until I asked some trusted friends what they thought of it... Really great feedback - I got which changed the face of that new card entirely.
Now why am I bringing this up? To reiterate the online marketers mantra: "Test everything." There really is no substitute for it. There is no better way of finding out than asking the 'the marketplace' (or some friends).
Wishing you insightful testing!